Revision and its legitimacy

Many people don't understand this but revision is an imperative part of growing as an individual whether that be related to studies, sports, or any aspect of life. We are constantly evolving and as we evolve we change. Sometimes for the worst but we generally adapt and modify for the better. There is always something you can improve on and when you revise yourself or are revised by a pier, you are given the chance to make an impact. In regards to wrtiting and the writing process, revision is criticial. Not only do I revise myself, but I have my piers and superiors (teachers) revise me as well. There are certain flawed aspects of my writing that I won't be able to pick out. Or it may sound good to me, but improper to those reviewing it. Reasons like that entail necessarry review by others. But looking at the big picture, I associate revision with all areas of my life. Looking to become always, and more wise, revision is the tool I use to go about that task. Revision is something everybody should be comfortable doing....after all, everone can improve....no one person is better than another. I was watching a television seminar that really impacted me. It demonstrated how people are afraid to be crtiticized or revise themselves. They become intimidated. And it was told to all that we are all equal. Nobody is better than another; we are all the sons and daughters of god.