Laura:

You have in-depth description of each step you took to discover your identity and this is really good. It enables the reader to see how you examined yourself and the results that came about. In your intro you tell exactly what you are going to do in intricate explanation and I feel that is a bonus because some people forget to inform the reader. I like that you incorporate sources that directly influenced and helped you and quote the most impacting areas from those sources. It seems that your original perception of yourself as a blogger was incorrect and suprisingly mine was of myself as well. You have spot-on sentence fluency and the organization of the paper is overall satisfactory. Good work!